Writers In The Storm is delighted to welcome paranormal writer and blogger, Jami Gold! She’ll be stopping in over the next few days to answer any comments you have. (Thanks, Jami!)
On my blog last week, I talked about how it’s fascinating to watch a story evolve from a story seed into a full-blown draft. By the time we type “The End,” we often forget how small the seed started and have a hard time recognizing how the two are even related.
Similarly, stories evolve a great deal from first draft to finished draft—especially when we’re still climbing a steep learning curve. If we analyze the ways a story can evolve through the editing process, we might know how to focus our revisions.
I’m not talking about the editing we do to make a story prettier, cleaner, or faster paced. I’m talking about the big picture revisions that change the essence of the story behind the words.
Types of Story Evolution
A story’s tone greatly affects a reader’s experience. The Sookie Stackhouse books by Charlaine Harris (source material for the True Blood TV show) deal with many dark subjects, but the tone of the books is light and fluffy for the most part, despite the threat of mortal peril. While revising, we can control the reader’s experience by changing the tone.
Related to the above point, changing the voice of the story will often change the tone. A chatty or jokey voice tends to make the story less dark and serious. This doesn’t mean a serious story can’t have comic relief, but maybe the source of the jokes would be from a non-POV character, or maybe the one-liners would be along the lines of gallows humor.
- Point Of View
If a scene isn’t working, we might be able to fix it by using another character’s POV. Or we can try to switch a story from first person to third person, or vice versa. Similarly, making a third person POV into a deep third person POV affects how a story reads.
Character motivation is like a magic formula for changing the feel of a story. Think of all the reasons a character could be speeding while driving: impatience, escaping, rescuing, obliviousness, arrogance, etc. Each of those would lead to different interpretation for the reader. Same action, different reader reaction. Then if we take it to the next level and add complex or competing motivations, or subtext, the story changes again.
When we have a strong theme, our story naturally feels deeper and more serious. During revisions, we can tweak wording or sentences to accentuate the themes. If you need help bringing out themes in your story, check out my post for ideas or look at Jenny Hansen’s post here on Writers In The Storm, Focusing On Your Story’s DNA.
This can mean anything from adding subtlety or subtext to going deeper into characters’ emotions. Real people are complex and act against logic or their own best interests sometimes. We have competing needs fighting for control over which way we react in a situation. Adding that element of unpredictability to our stories helps them avoid being cliché or formulaic. Readers will believe in characters who do something stupid if those motivations are laid out for them to piece together.
Being Deliberate with Our Writing
When we write, everything we type is a choice. We not only choose between this word and that word, but also how we use the above elements to affect a reader’s experience. And even though these aspects seem subtle, they make a huge difference in how a story reads.
So when we revise, now that we no longer have to do the drafting work of puzzling over plot, subplot, and tying everything together, we can go back to the drawing board and figure out what type of experience we want our readers to have. Do we want the story to feel light or serious? How intimately do we want the reader to experience what the characters go through?
If the story we want isn’t the story we have, but we can’t figure out why, we might be tempted to toss it. We might even worry that we’re not capable of doing the subject justice. But maybe it just means that one of these big picture things is off a bit. In other words, it’s fixable. *smile*
Which of the above elements have you changed when revising a story? Were the changes big or small? What about the results? How much did the changes affect the readers’ experience, the essence of the story behind the words?
After triggering the vampire/werewolf feud with an errant typo, Jami Gold moved to Arizona and decided to become a writer, where she could put her talent for making up stuff to good use. Fortunately, her muse, an arrogant male who delights in making her sound as insane as possible, rewards her with unique and rich story ideas.
Fueled by chocolate, Jami writes paranormal romance and urban fantasy tales that range from dark to humorous, but one thing remains the same: Normal need not apply. Just ask her family—and zombie cat.